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By *rmrshorny2 OP   Couple
over a year ago

Seaside

What do people really think of our profile

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Yes it looks fine, by the way it might be hard to find single women tho, good luck.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Nice and short, straight to the point unlike some that are a mortgage draft. Check your wording though, I think some missing words there.

Pity you dont live in SW

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By *rmrshorny2 OP   Couple
over a year ago

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ty what words are missing that you think are needed

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"What do people really think of our profile "

Sounds really truncated, punctuation awful, no capital letters, I would hazard a guess and say that English isn't your first language?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

The dialogue on you profile need to be tidier. We're not were that kind thing.

Photos are good...but less can be more...

If trying to attracted a bi female then possibly leave the cock pictures in private.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

For us t it does not sat a lot about you, fair part of it is asking what people thing about it, needs rewriting,

The photos of cocks and pussy need hiding, the dressed ones are far more inviting x

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By *rmrshorny2 OP   Couple
over a year ago

Seaside

short and sweet

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By *abioMan
over a year ago

Newcastle and Gateshead


"short and sweet "

too short and sweet.....

and thats what you get for listening to everybody... and slither of personality (of which there wasn't much to begin with with version 1) has disappeared with version 2

it says absolutely nothing about you.... it says absolutely nothing about the people you are after.....

so if i were in a couple, for example, how on earth would we know we were the perfect couple for you... and you were for us....

we wouldn't........

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

very good profile with some great pics.

you both know what your looking after no need to put anything else, as sure you will have loads of contacts with whats in your profile

T/P

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Oh just another thing the getting to know others is part of the enjoyment, if someone likes what they see will contact you.

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By *adybee77Woman
over a year ago

MAMOBA, miles and miles of bugger all (Aberdeenshire)

Wow, thats to the point. I'd pass you by with a profile that sparse - instant thanks but no.

No pictures of the male would be a big put off for me as well.

You need to say what you are looking for (other that just bi fem) and what you offer a meet, what you enjoy.

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By *adybee77Woman
over a year ago

MAMOBA, miles and miles of bugger all (Aberdeenshire)


"Oh just another thing the getting to know others is part of the enjoyment, if someone likes what they see will contact you."

As a single bi fem who does meet couples - I wouldn't - I need to see a profile too to know what the couple are looking to find. I don't do 50 questions to find out (for example) you are looking for BBW single bi fem who performs with just the lady.

Thats the point of a profile!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

You're not really giving us much to work with other than to say, it's 23 words long.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"You're not really giving us much to work with other than to say, it's 23 words long. "

If you're wanting to meet as a couple then I'd expect to see pics of him too (I do get a little tired of having to ask for them!)

There's no hint of personality and a few words isn't going to cut it. the profile text and how it's written is important to me and so I'd pass.

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By *rmrshorny2 OP   Couple
over a year ago

Seaside

updated profile

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

You need to include punctuation in your profile.

Use paragraphs:

Talk about yourselves, what are your likes, dislikes, what you are looking for etc!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

The usual, few words and fewer pics of the male .....

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By *rmrshorny2 OP   Couple
over a year ago

Seaside

there seems to be little you can do to please everybody

too short not enough about us that's part of the meeting to get to know

instead spread our lifes all over fab suppose you cant please all the people all the time

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By *mallteaserWoman
over a year ago

Central

Just be yourself to hell with what others think xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It looks fine however, people aren't looking for fine they're seeking exceptional. Try to put in some punctuation to make a coherent sentence and it may move towards good.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"there seems to be little you can do to please everybody

too short not enough about us that's part of the meeting to get to know

instead spread our lifes all over fab suppose you cant please all the people all the time"

Maybe use some capital letters and punctuation, also some pics of the male would be good. no cock ones though. good luck

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