FabSwingers.com forum: Wow

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Hello Fabbers!

Been here a week and thanks for the warm welcome!

Managed to get a profile together and been interesting chatting in the chat rooms.

I hear the forums is the place to be! So here I am making my introduction.

Come say hello xxx

Raz xx

P.s Any constructive criticism of the profile would be helpful.

Many thanks

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It's perfect !

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Thank you,

It took me a week but I put a lot of thought into it and really did my research on the forums and stuff like that.

I tried to address everything so hopefully can utilize it properly.

The problem I seem to have is getting people to read it

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It did become a struggle after the second line, but I persisted in the name of research x

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By *icecouple561Couple
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over a year ago

East Sussex

Hello and welcome.

Your profile is much too long and says too much about what you want, none of it tells us what you have to offer sexually. I woud advise you to cut it shorter and explain what you can bring to a meeting.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Hello and welcome.

Thank you for the feedback. I shall re draft it to include the point you suggested.

Thanks again x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I think it's perfectly fine as it is

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Welcome to fab raz. I knew it wouldnt take long till someone had a pop...suppose you did ask. Just have your profile how you feel is ok and not how the forum police say. Happy fabbing

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I think it reads very nicely

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By *habsMan
over a year ago

Fortress of Solitude, Middlesex

"Hello and welcome.

Ah, but how many couples and single female profiles ever say what they have to offer?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Hello and welcome.

Ah, but how many couples and single female profiles ever say what they have to offer?"

Doh !! its obvious, vagina , tits and coffee

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By *ngelbiTVTV/TS
over a year ago

Dyserth, North Wales

Profiles don't need to show what you want sexually or what you bring to a meet.

Conversation can do those bits.

Profiles in general are to allow people a glimpse of you and who you are and what interests you have.

I've read your profile and it's actually very well written. I know you're not into TVs but still happy to give feedback when it's deserved.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Profiles don't need to show what you want sexually or what you bring to a meet.

Conversation can do those bits.

Profiles in general are to allow people a glimpse of you and who you are and what interests you have.

I've read your profile and it's actually very well written. I know you're not into TVs but still happy to give feedback when it's deserved."

Thank you for your comments. I am never one to just dismiss feedback. I feel since feedback is subjective to a degree one should look at it and pick out the advice which can add value and clarity!

I also agree on your comment about conversation. Sometimes leaving something to the imagination is far more exciting

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"I think it reads very nicely

Thank you, I do try. x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I read your profile with interest and a smile. Rather eloquent I thought

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By *icecouple561Couple
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over a year ago

East Sussex

"Hello and welcome.

Thank you for the feedback. I shall re draft it to include the point you suggested.

Thanks again x"

You're welcome, I hope your time on fab is all you hope it will be.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Welcome to the forums Raz.

Your profile reads well and articulate. My only observation woyld be to see your sense of humour/ cheeky side come through, but thats all. Xx

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"I read your profile with interest and a smile. Rather eloquent I thought

Well if I can raise a smile for a lady, I guess I have done my good deed of the day.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Welcome to the forums Raz.

Your profile reads well and articulate. My only observation woyld be to see your sense of humour/ cheeky side come through, but thats all. Xx"

Interesting observation and thank you for your comments. I guess I could possibly put that down to my shy/reserved side. Oh well - something to address and thank you

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Welcome to the forums Raz.

Your profile reads well and articulate. My only observation woyld be to see your sense of humour/ cheeky side come through, but thats all. Xx

Interesting observation and thank you for your comments. I guess I could possibly put that down to my shy/reserved side. Oh well - something to address and thank you

You are most welcome. It maybe because ima cheeky madam. JJust have fun. I hope I haven't offended you

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Welcome to the forums Raz.

Your profile reads well and articulate. My only observation woyld be to see your sense of humour/ cheeky side come through, but thats all. Xx

Interesting observation and thank you for your comments. I guess I could possibly put that down to my shy/reserved side. Oh well - something to address and thank you

You are most welcome. It maybe because ima cheeky madam. JJust have fun. I hope I haven't offended you "

I developed a typing stammer now too

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Welcome to the forums Raz.

Your profile reads well and articulate. My only observation woyld be to see your sense of humour/ cheeky side come through, but thats all. Xx

Interesting observation and thank you for your comments. I guess I could possibly put that down to my shy/reserved side. Oh well - something to address and thank you

You are most welcome. It maybe because ima cheeky madam. JJust have fun. I hope I haven't offended you

I developed a typing stammer now too

Haha, It's quite alright I am not easily offended. Thick skin and broad shoulders

As for the cheeky madam, well you certainly have the derear for it

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Welcome to the forums Raz.

Your profile reads well and articulate. My only observation woyld be to see your sense of humour/ cheeky side come through, but thats all. Xx

Interesting observation and thank you for your comments. I guess I could possibly put that down to my shy/reserved side. Oh well - something to address and thank you

You are most welcome. It maybe because ima cheeky madam. JJust have fun. I hope I haven't offended you

I developed a typing stammer now too

Haha, It's quite alright I am not easily offended. Thick skin and broad shoulders

As for the cheeky madam, well you certainly have the derear for it

Is that a polite way of saying I've got a fat arse

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Welcome to the forums Raz.

Your profile reads well and articulate. My only observation woyld be to see your sense of humour/ cheeky side come through, but thats all. Xx

Interesting observation and thank you for your comments. I guess I could possibly put that down to my shy/reserved side. Oh well - something to address and thank you

You are most welcome. It maybe because ima cheeky madam. JJust have fun. I hope I haven't offended you

I developed a typing stammer now too

Haha, It's quite alright I am not easily offended. Thick skin and broad shoulders

As for the cheeky madam, well you certainly have the derear for it

Is that a polite way of saying I've got a fat arse

The word Fat is interpreted in so many ways these days. I think it would be better described as perfectly formed and when bent over, I could probably bounce a pound coin off it x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Welcome to the forums Raz.

Your profile reads well and articulate. My only observation woyld be to see your sense of humour/ cheeky side come through, but thats all. Xx

Interesting observation and thank you for your comments. I guess I could possibly put that down to my shy/reserved side. Oh well - something to address and thank you

You are most welcome. It maybe because ima cheeky madam. JJust have fun. I hope I haven't offended you

I developed a typing stammer now too

Haha, It's quite alright I am not easily offended. Thick skin and broad shoulders

As for the cheeky madam, well you certainly have the derear for it

Is that a polite way of saying I've got a fat arse

The word Fat is interpreted in so many ways these days. I think it would be better described as perfectly formed and when bent over, I could probably bounce a pound coin off it x

I shall take that as a compliment then and thank you. Xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

'Evening, Raz.

Yours is a most pleasantly written profile. Glad there aren't too many of those - it would rob us of the joy to moan about them.

Enjoy your time here.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I'm sure you do

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By *empting Devil.Woman
over a year ago

Sheffield

"Hello and welcome.

Ah, but how many couples and single female profiles ever say what they have to offer?

Doh !! its obvious, vagina , tits and coffee

Oi! I've got a gob too yer know!

And tea bags.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"'Evening, Raz.

Yours is a most pleasantly written profile. Glad there aren't too many of those - it would rob us of the joy to moan about them.

Enjoy your time here.

Thank's and I shall most certainly try to enjoy my time on FAB.

I feel that I have almost done you a disservice Dear lady by not giving you something to moan about

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Hello and welcome.

Ah, but how many couples and single female profiles ever say what they have to offer?

Doh !! its obvious, vagina , tits and coffee

Oi! I've got a gob too yer know!

And tea bags.

Always was a sucker for a decent cup of Mint Tea

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"'Evening, Raz.

Yours is a most pleasantly written profile. Glad there aren't too many of those - it would rob us of the joy to moan about them.

Enjoy your time here.

Thank's and I shall most certainly try to enjoy my time on FAB.

I feel that I have almost done you a disservice Dear lady by not giving you something to moan about

Don't worry - I'm sure I can find something. If you're still worried - you can always PM me with something moansome.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"'Evening, Raz.

Yours is a most pleasantly written profile. Glad there aren't too many of those - it would rob us of the joy to moan about them.

Enjoy your time here.

Thank's and I shall most certainly try to enjoy my time on FAB.

I feel that I have almost done you a disservice Dear lady by not giving you something to moan about

Don't worry - I'm sure I can find something. If you're still worried - you can always PM me with something moansome.

Well that is very kind of you. Now I would offer my moansome services but after reading your profile I have to inform you that I am still on the correct side of 30 (Just)

Or in other words - "Computer says NO!"

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"'Evening, Raz.

Yours is a most pleasantly written profile. Glad there aren't too many of those - it would rob us of the joy to moan about them.

Enjoy your time here.

Thank's and I shall most certainly try to enjoy my time on FAB.

I feel that I have almost done you a disservice Dear lady by not giving you something to moan about

Don't worry - I'm sure I can find something. If you're still worried - you can always PM me with something moansome.

Well that is very kind of you. Now I would offer my moansome services but after reading your profile I have to inform you that I am still on the correct side of 30 (Just)

Or in other words - "Computer says NO!"

Ah - how disappointing. And how typical of my terrible short-term memory.

I'll lower my guards for 5 minutes.

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By *opping_candyWoman
over a year ago

West Yorkshire

"Hello Fabbers!

Been here a week and thanks for the warm welcome!

Managed to get a profile together and been interesting chatting in the chat rooms.

I hear the forums is the place to be! So here I am making my introduction.

Come say hello xxx

Raz xx

P.s Any constructive criticism of the profile would be helpful.

Many thanks

I've got deja vu! You're like a yo yo Razzy!

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"'Evening, Raz.

Yours is a most pleasantly written profile. Glad there aren't too many of those - it would rob us of the joy to moan about them.

Enjoy your time here.

Thank's and I shall most certainly try to enjoy my time on FAB.

I feel that I have almost done you a disservice Dear lady by not giving you something to moan about

Don't worry - I'm sure I can find something. If you're still worried - you can always PM me with something moansome.

Well that is very kind of you. Now I would offer my moansome services but after reading your profile I have to inform you that I am still on the correct side of 30 (Just)

Or in other words - "Computer says NO!"

Ah - how disappointing. And how typical of my terrible short-term memory.

I'll lower my guards for 5 minutes."

Sorry I went to have dinner, So when do these 5 minutes start from? x

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Hello Fabbers!

Been here a week and thanks for the warm welcome!

Managed to get a profile together and been interesting chatting in the chat rooms.

I hear the forums is the place to be! So here I am making my introduction.

Come say hello xxx

Raz xx

P.s Any constructive criticism of the profile would be helpful.

Many thanks

I've got deja vu! You're like a yo yo Razzy!"

The joys of indulgence, but too much of a good thing is bad for you, better to take a break from time to time

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"'Evening, Raz.

Yours is a most pleasantly written profile. Glad there aren't too many of those - it would rob us of the joy to moan about them.

Enjoy your time here.

Thank's and I shall most certainly try to enjoy my time on FAB.

I feel that I have almost done you a disservice Dear lady by not giving you something to moan about

Don't worry - I'm sure I can find something. If you're still worried - you can always PM me with something moansome.

Well that is very kind of you. Now I would offer my moansome services but after reading your profile I have to inform you that I am still on the correct side of 30 (Just)

Or in other words - "Computer says NO!"

Ah - how disappointing. And how typical of my terrible short-term memory.

I'll lower my guards for 5 minutes.

Sorry I went to have dinner, So when do these 5 minutes start from? x -)"

Been and gone

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"'Evening, Raz.

Yours is a most pleasantly written profile. Glad there aren't too many of those - it would rob us of the joy to moan about them.

Enjoy your time here.

Thank's and I shall most certainly try to enjoy my time on FAB.

I feel that I have almost done you a disservice Dear lady by not giving you something to moan about

Don't worry - I'm sure I can find something. If you're still worried - you can always PM me with something moansome.

Well that is very kind of you. Now I would offer my moansome services but after reading your profile I have to inform you that I am still on the correct side of 30 (Just)

Or in other words - "Computer says NO!"

Ah - how disappointing. And how typical of my terrible short-term memory.

I'll lower my guards for 5 minutes.

Sorry I went to have dinner, So when do these 5 minutes start from? x -)

Been and gone

As you see, you snooze you loose. Oh well, do you call you the one that got away then

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

One more time then - people get annoyed when others hog the thread...

Oops! The thread is yours anyway

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"One more time then - people get annoyed when others hog the thread...

Oops! The thread is yours anyway

All done

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Nice profile but I'd omit the "selective" paragraph, it's fine to make a simple statement but that paragraph suggests you may be hard work. Ladies have their pick here.

Also put some tempting pics on show. It doesn't have to be your face or your cock.

Finally welcome to the forum

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Nice profile but I'd omit the "selective" paragraph, it's fine to make a simple statement but that paragraph suggests you may be hard work. Ladies have their pick here.

Also put some tempting pics on show. It doesn't have to be your face or your cock.

Finally welcome to the forum

Thank you kindly for your welcome.

I am in the process of conjuring up ideas for some "imaginative pictures" for my public gallery.

As for the paragraph you mentioned, it is exactly for that purpose! I am hard work, but then quality never did come easy!

The same way a women / couple have standards as do I. I fully appreciate that women do have there pick on here but I am probably looking for that 1% at most.

Thank you again for your feedback and welcome. I enjoyed the banter in your profile (demon) oh and surely a flavored condom would be better orally

Strawberry

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