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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Hey, I'm really shite at actually working profiles/the first message, I do fine once there's actually a conversation to take part in, things to joke and talk about but that initial pitch I'm not great with.

Anyone mind having a quick read of my profile an giving any tips?/if I should change add anything?

Thanks folks :p

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I really don't think people like reading profiles where it says ask x n y n you will be blocked

You say ask barebacking you will be blocked

Wouldn't it read more positively to say no barebacking under any circumstances rather than sounding like a blocking diva??

Presenting the 'no no's ' as a positive rather than a negative still gets the message across

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

For a man that has been here 4 weeks you don;t seem to be doing to bad.

The obvious negative is that your profile focuses exclusively on what you expect from men messaging you and makes no reference to what you can offer couples and females.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

True it is focused more on what guys message but that's been because couples/fem/tgirls have generally written something that I can actually respond to, the please.don't send xyZ stuff I only added cause I was getting a but sick of "hey come.suck me now" style messages from guys.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"True it is focused more on what guys message but that's been because couples/fem/tgirls have generally written something that I can actually respond to, the please.don't send xyZ stuff I only added cause I was getting a but sick of "hey come.suck me now" style messages from guys.

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Yeah well I get enough of those too but I either just ignore or decline n don't let em bother me! I wouldn't block someone for that tho. It comes over a bit petty

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Right but of a rewrite, any better?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Right but of a rewrite, any better?"

Perfick

Oh n the scar quite cute too

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Heh I think it's a love it or hate it thing with a lot of people only had it and it's twin (down my side) for a few month so still getting used to them.myself.

not sure if I should get rid of the old body pic without it incase people think they're fake pics/different people?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Heh I think it's a love it or hate it thing with a lot of people only had it and it's twin (down my side) for a few month so still getting used to them.myself.

not sure if I should get rid of the old body pic without it incase people think they're fake pics/different people?"

I would keep it there as it gives a good talking point for people so you can get to know one another. And it separates you from tge crowd

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I don't think it matters having the before pic up if your body shape ain't changed

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Hehe I suppose it is a "unique"feature I Wonder if there's any people out there with a scar fetish I do have a heck of a collection these days

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By *inaTitzTV/TS
over a year ago

Titz Towers, North Notts

Your profile looks pretty decent. That scar is spectacular.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Right but of a rewrite, any better?"

Yes

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Hehe I suppose it is a "unique"feature I Wonder if there's any people out there with a scar fetish I do have a heck of a collection these days"

Er yes actually

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Heh, any advice on a head line?

Maybe I should change from saying it's a motorcycle wound to saying it's from a sword fight :p

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By *inaTitzTV/TS
over a year ago

Titz Towers, North Notts


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Maybe I should change from saying it's a motorcycle wound to saying it's from a sword fight :p

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Oh no, I'd suggest Vampire Slaying at the very least, or maybe from when you were trying to decapitate the Kurgan

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Haha, maybe should have a competition, "best scar backstory" :p

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Hey, I'm really shite at actually working profiles/the first message, I do fine once there's actually a conversation to take part in, things to joke and talk about but that initial pitch I'm not great with.

Anyone mind having a quick read of my profile an giving any tips?/if I should change add anything?

Thanks folks :p"

Well it looks fine now or have you changed it?

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Yeah I've changed it from.the advice on here :p

as a couple is there anything you guys like to see on profiles?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Yeah I've changed it from.the advice on here :p

as a couple is there anything you guys like to see on profiles?"

It looks like a well written profile better than most on here good luck with it.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Thanks actually gotten a few nice messages since changing it so thanks again all

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