FabSwingers.com forum: look at my profile what do you think

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

pretty self explanatory have a look at my profile people and let me know how it looks and what you think of it

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By *opping_candyWoman
over a year ago

West Yorkshire

Wellyou asked for it so I'll give it lol...

Your pic is rather unclear. Which is a shame as I have a feeling it would be a great pic!

Couple of typos including 'hard worked' should be working, outlook should be outlet I think?

I'd also leave out the bit about anal. It might put some people off who could think your primary aim is getting in their arse.

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By *opping_candyWoman
over a year ago

West Yorkshire

Oh and you say you are hard working /worked twice ok we get it lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I would agree with above however I think you should get rid of the last line 'i am very hard worked and busy' as you have already said that you are a hardworking professional, saying it twice is pointless.

You also need to make a decision on the age range you would truly meet rather than 18-99; you might enjoy an 18 year old but surely you wouldn't meet a 99 year old

It is quite a nice picture of you but a little blurry.

Good luck though and welcome to Fab

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Poorly written (I not i and not a single fullstop) which contradicts the proffessional claims.

One very poor picture.

With the exception of sepcifically stating that you enjoy anal, everything else is very vague.

Ultimately the profile does nothing to stand out from the 100's of other of singlemen on here.

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By *am123Man
over a year ago

essex chelmsford

u did ask

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By *artinichilled1TV/TS
over a year ago

Bedford

Not very good. Could do better x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Poorly written (I not i and not a single fullstop) which contradicts the proffessional claims.

One very poor picture.

With the exception of sepcifically stating that you enjoy anal, everything else is very vague.

Ultimately the profile does nothing to stand out from the 100's of other of singlemen on here."

pot kettle black

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By *adybee77Woman
over a year ago

MAMOBA, miles and miles of bugger all (Aberdeenshire)

You need to spend a little more time on the wording - "know how to use my hands but have adventured to use my hands in other ways" erm what?

Full stops, capital letters, and too vague.

The inability to accommodate will put lots of people off too - its either someone cheating, or for you age, more likely living at home with parents, neither very attractive to some people.

Picture is terrible - can't even really make it out. Go for a nicer picture, thats clear - doesn't need to be a face pic - some of the best ones are a nice bottom shot of a nice bum in tight boxers, or a torso shot.

Only good thing - your nude pics are private!

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By *exykirstyWoman
over a year ago

North of Manchester

The profile has not punctuation, written all in small caps, so no grammar.

Women look at the profile and can access what a man is like from how the profile is written.

You one in a small drop and would say more like one single guy to every 200 single women.

Read your profile yourself, and stop and think, how does it stand out?

The picture is not good at all, much better a good torso pic or boxers or bum if you do not want a full face picture.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

You've said professional 3 times on it

We get the picture

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