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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Hi to you all x

Am new here , well not quite true been on and off do almost a year but necessary really posted in the forums x

Just wondered I have written my profile out and am hoping its any good x please could anyone take a look and tell me what they think x

And please no judgement on the content if you don't agree with it just good constructive feed back if you please x don't wanna be ridiculed or owt x

Thanks in advance to all you great people xxx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Original content and made me laugh and constructive feedback is that it is a tad long.

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By *ady4ladyWoman
over a year ago

liverpool

Also gave me a good laugh, and well done with the candid photos. !!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Gave us a grin. But as stated above its a bit long. Without getting into the inevitable grammar debate, just give it a read through and you'll see straight away a few howlers that need tidying. You're obviously a bright spark - you'll see them x

Good luck.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Really don't get the photos!? Bear in mind the profile is supposed to generate interest, almost like an advertisement.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Thanks to you all for the feedback will try and take all comments on x

Thanks xxxx

J

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I like the profile. I like the fact that it is long, a bit different and actually says something.

I like the fact that you are honest about being married, but I dislike that you followed that with having a pop at your peers by suggesting that many other people are lying about their marital status. While undoubtedly the case with some people there are also many genuinely single people here and ultimately people in glass hoses shouldn't throw stones.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"I like the profile. I like the fact that it is long, a bit different and actually says something.

I like the fact that you are honest about being married, but I dislike that you followed that with having a pop at your peers by suggesting that many other people are lying about their marital status. While undoubtedly the case with some people there are also many genuinely single people here and ultimately people in glass hoses shouldn't throw stones."

I apologise that I made that comment in my profile as it was not ment to often nor cause controversy x

I will reword and change that bit x my apologies xx

Thanks guys xxx

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