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By *r. Mac OP   Man
over a year ago

Bexleyheath

Can you let me know what you think of my profile iv increased the size of the bio and added a couple pictures

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

You might want to ust cast your own eyes over it again, as I think you'll find that you've contradicted yourself.

Your bio text says you can't accommodate, but your profile settings suggest otherwise.

And, while I get that you find older women attractive, would you really sleep with a 99 year old?

You're also looking for the most sought after 'commodity' (for want of a better word) on fab, so you really, really do need to make sure your profile is bang on.

Aside from the fact that you enjoy eating pussy, I'm still struggling to see what you have to offer any potential meets.

What is your USP?

What would someone get out of a meet with you that they wouldn't get from someone else?

Given your target audience, you really, REALLY do have to sell yourself

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By *r. Mac OP   Man
over a year ago

Bexleyheath


"You might want to ust cast your own eyes over it again, as I think you'll find that you've contradicted yourself.

Your bio text says you can't accommodate, but your profile settings suggest otherwise.

And, while I get that you find older women attractive, would you really sleep with a 99 year old?

You're also looking for the most sought after 'commodity' (for want of a better word) on fab, so you really, really do need to make sure your profile is bang on.

Aside from the fact that you enjoy eating pussy, I'm still struggling to see what you have to offer any potential meets.

What is your USP?

What would someone get out of a meet with you that they wouldn't get from someone else?

Given your target audience, you really, REALLY do have to sell yourself"

Wow I really didn't think that deep into it now I have some thinking to do and work on this hard (I'm not too good with words) and thank you for this

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By *anshee99Woman
over a year ago

all over

As with a cock, it's not about the length but the impact..

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By *r. Mac OP   Man
over a year ago

Bexleyheath


"You might want to ust cast your own eyes over it again, as I think you'll find that you've contradicted yourself.

Your bio text says you can't accommodate, but your profile settings suggest otherwise.

And, while I get that you find older women attractive, would you really sleep with a 99 year old?

You're also looking for the most sought after 'commodity' (for want of a better word) on fab, so you really, really do need to make sure your profile is bang on.

Aside from the fact that you enjoy eating pussy, I'm still struggling to see what you have to offer any potential meets.

What is your USP?

What would someone get out of a meet with you that they wouldn't get from someone else?

Given your target audience, you really, REALLY do have to sell yourself"
How about now

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By *r. Mac OP   Man
over a year ago

Bexleyheath


"As with a cock, it's not about the length but the impact.. "
How about now

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By *anshee99Woman
over a year ago

all over

Full stops, commas, breath!

Your you're

I've

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By *r. Mac OP   Man
over a year ago

Bexleyheath

OK I'll correct that

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By *r. Mac OP   Man
over a year ago

Bexleyheath


"Full stops, commas, breath!

Your you're

I've

"

OK I've corrected the grammar how does my profile look over-all now

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Looking a lot better.

You'll probsbly find yourself tweaking it from time to time anyway, but now people can get a really good sense of what you're into and, more importantly if it fits in with what they like.

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By *r. Mac OP   Man
over a year ago

Bexleyheath


"Looking a lot better.

You'll probsbly find yourself tweaking it from time to time anyway, but now people can get a really good sense of what you're into and, more importantly if it fits in with what they like.

"

Thank you

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Good to see someone taking onboard the advice they’re offered and making changes.

Enjoy Fab OP!

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By *sBlueWoman
over a year ago

Up North

Better op good you have taken the advice on board. Good luck

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By *r. Mac OP   Man
over a year ago

Bexleyheath


" Better op good you have taken the advice on board. Good luck "

Thank you everyone

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By *ustustwo.1965Couple
over a year ago

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" Better op good you have taken the advice on board. Good luck

Thank you everyone "

Three out of four paragraphs starting with " I ".

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