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By *ophieslutTV/TS Forum Mod
over a year ago
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It's by far from the worst profiles on here, so you've done pretty good.
The secret is to ensure that it tells your target audience what they want. You've mentioned VWE, but this means different sizes to different people, so you may as well expand on the details.
Check the typos, as mentioned by others, for example, use 'too', when you mean also, etc. And ' I'm ' is mostly correct, but there's one of them that is wrongly 'Im', no apostrophe.
Keep your profile regularly updated, refreshed and interesting. Really focus on what you're offering, details always help, and keep it light and show that you're approachable, friendly etc.
Check your photos, as some of them shrink, when clicked to enlarge them - this especially is the case with your cock pic, which is a gorgeous cock, but the photo shrinks it down, so does it no justice!
Good luck! Sophiex
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